“Would you not say that the key of life is to gain knowledge. I believe it is. I also believe that it is important to spread that word to tell eny body who will listen what you know. You must be magnetic you must have the grace of a fish while having the pacitence of a turtle. What you cannot do is become a broken tape repeating and repeating if you do that you will bore the…”
Max sits there listening to this man speaking. He is board. He is sleepy he is alseep.
October 15, 2014 at 6:03 pm
Thank you. This made me giggle. I like the concept of the protagonist listening to a sel-help tape that is condescending. Well done.
Target:
– how might you develop this further?
– how might you make this fit the conventions of Young Adult fiction more consistently?