Arthur's English Journal

How I live now

Why is she in England?

15 pounds for half an hour. What mugs are paying that much. Back to the normal space. As I drive round to the normal space I begin to scroll through the convosations I had with my Mum. All I can really remember is that she said this girl was some sort of rebel and to make shore that I call her bye some nick name only problem is I can’t remember it.

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    jnorth

    Arthur,

    I like your opening sentences, they give a clear sense of frustration. The ends g has lots of potential for development.

    Targets:
    – be careful with homophones – shore vs sure
    – vary your vocabulary to avoid repetition, look at the phrase ‘normal space’
    – did you write a plan?

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